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If music be the food of love
Then let it then be starved.
Death's melody of cold silence
Means that pain must then be halved.

If philosophy clips an angel's wings,
Then a scholar I shall be.
Earth's chains shall too tie down their feet
And their tears will fill the seas.
I had the first two lines in this running around my head, so I wrote them down. And the other lines followed swiftly!
Anyway, I've kind of twisted famous lines from poets.
It needs another verse.
I'll get back to you on it.
I genuinely don't understand how to categorise the literature. O.e
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littlemousemolly Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Oh well dammit. XD I have been writing sonnets the past few days, and this... this is much better than anything I could have done. (Though I will be uploading a sonnet about Reichenbach in a bit.)
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ocean-crystal Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2012
I bet it's not!
And yay, can't wait! :3
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littlemousemolly Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
It really is! You're a really good poet. c:
(Here's the sonnet, if you haven't seen it: [link] )
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ocean-crystal Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2012
Thanks...and that's great! Better than mine. :L Mine's only 8 lines of drivel!
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littlemousemolly Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Yours sounds deeeeep. XD I rhymed "be" with "Moriarty". xD
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ocean-crystal Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2012
S'ok, Robert browning made rhymes like that!
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littlemousemolly Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Did he really? I need to read more poetry. XD I write quite a bit, but don't read much.
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ocean-crystal Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2012
Yeah, we're studying him in English, so..yeah...!
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thehatbearer15 Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
yeah me neither. this is really good.
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ocean-crystal Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2012
Thank you :3
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